Peer-Critique
1. Who were the sources?
Reyna Velazquez, Sandy Salazar, Daniela Salazar
2. Summarize in 1-3 sentences the story:
Katie's grandmother crossed the border at a young age. They faced hardships and discrimination, but still persevered and made it across the border.
3. How many paragraphs is the story?
The story is 31 paragraphs.
4. How many words is the story (you can do this in the Google Doc itself)?
The story is 871 words.
5. How many direct quotes are there in the story?
There are 16 direct quotes
6. How many different people are quoted in the story?
3 people are quoted in the story.
7. Which quote is the most impactful of all the ones included?
"I remember my mother in law would forbid me from eating anything for at least 2 days it was horrible," Velazquez said.
8. Where is that quote located in the story (beginning, middle, end)?
In the beginning
9. Does the lede effectively capture the readers attention?
Yes
10.If their could have been one additional person interviewed for the story, who would it be?
She could interview and uncle about how they were affected
11. Is the story objective, which means are all non-direct quotes statements of fact and NOT the opinion of the writer?
The story is objective.
12. Are there any unanswered questions that you have after reading the article?
I have no unanswered questions.
13. Write a headline to go with this story:
Courageous or Dangerous? A story of crossing the border
14. Sum up your opinion of the story:
I enjoyed reading the feature. It was an inspirational story about difficult times.
15. Give them a peer grade from 0-100
97
Reyna Velazquez, Sandy Salazar, Daniela Salazar
2. Summarize in 1-3 sentences the story:
Katie's grandmother crossed the border at a young age. They faced hardships and discrimination, but still persevered and made it across the border.
3. How many paragraphs is the story?
The story is 31 paragraphs.
4. How many words is the story (you can do this in the Google Doc itself)?
The story is 871 words.
5. How many direct quotes are there in the story?
There are 16 direct quotes
6. How many different people are quoted in the story?
3 people are quoted in the story.
7. Which quote is the most impactful of all the ones included?
"I remember my mother in law would forbid me from eating anything for at least 2 days it was horrible," Velazquez said.
8. Where is that quote located in the story (beginning, middle, end)?
In the beginning
9. Does the lede effectively capture the readers attention?
Yes
10.If their could have been one additional person interviewed for the story, who would it be?
She could interview and uncle about how they were affected
11. Is the story objective, which means are all non-direct quotes statements of fact and NOT the opinion of the writer?
The story is objective.
12. Are there any unanswered questions that you have after reading the article?
I have no unanswered questions.
13. Write a headline to go with this story:
Courageous or Dangerous? A story of crossing the border
14. Sum up your opinion of the story:
I enjoyed reading the feature. It was an inspirational story about difficult times.
15. Give them a peer grade from 0-100
97
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